The animation was quite solid and you can tell alot of work was put into it, though the dialogue needs to be improved tremendously and I think it can defiantly be shortened alot of scenes had unnecessary time padding, you really could shave a good 20-30 seconds off of this on the subject I would suggest making the nuke a bit more fluid, when it went off it was really really off putting when next to the otherwise excellent animation. Overall I enjoyed it and I think with a bit of fine tuning and editing you could turn this into something special.